"Being A Noire..."

...yeah a Noire...

“Being a Noire…”

 

Angst and misty afternoons -

moments of ill-reputes and iridescent serenades.

Seems so many pierce what brittle-similes hide

and I …I walk the halls of diss-repair with

unnatural Sine - waves of missing sound and visual cues

of Judgement - bound - toward places left behind …within.

 

While without - Hysteria history - the study of me

by me

for - not me, but yet somehow cynicism does attach

and the tastes of thoughts flavored by

content

or that OTHER word - content -

curl tightly round and around

‘til even the knees fall free from

brain stem’s repartee.

 

Sigh… anyways

 

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Valentine]

I can almost see me being so content with what and who I am that my knees collapse and I am in dreamland. I had seizures for 10 years and that was my life those years. Valentine knees and then floor, and wake up in the emergency room.

[Chris]

that has to hurt...and be scary as hell.

[Valentine]

It was but it is over, thank God.

[Ruth]

Coils and springs to life within...casts a shadow but is chased away by a pause, however brief xo

[~]

It seems like I just took a trip inside the unlit paths of your mind. I love that last line- a sigh that may be interpreted so many ways.

[...]

haha beside all that...I like you, Chris. flavor that content with a little smoke. see if that uncurls that stem and help them knees :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Over my head..of course...

[Geca]

The imagery of this is astounding. I especially liked this little snippet: 'While without - Hysteria history - the study of me / by me'--that's the kind of line that can speak to a person, it's transcendental. Good job with this!

[Saddam]

Come up with sad segments but a meaningful write.

[LadyAnn68]

Sounds sad and heart-breaking. Longing to go back into time where places you were or existed with happiness and contentment on your shoulders.

[Emily B]

always mind full, somebody iknow and love taught me that, and to be honest

[Chris]

hi Em... you still got snow?

[Emily B]

just rain and mud :)

[Ana D S M]

Judgement comes too quick when all we want is acceptance, to not be a cast off or outsider.
But is it better to be popular in a circle of many or liked in a circle of few. I think I'm just speaking for my own situation here. This is how I interpret your poem based on my own feelings.

[Chris]

That is how we should interpret all poems - based on our own feelings...