"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

A Poem by Chris
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"Dreams And..."

Seems we live in the starlight,
and dream as we follow the sunlight -
eyes and breath drawn to
golden warmth and filling mellow heat
that holds all that we are,
were,
will be...
as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us...
and our taste IS
the breath we exhale,
and our thoughts are 
the flow of senses
and woven nows
that blend existence into futures past
and presents that become...
dreams and...
me's.

Chris

© 2016 Chris



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I have read a few of your glorious works so far and I am entirely taken by the way you write with such expressive and soul-touching beauty. This one, how you dance and play with emotions and the senses.. You are so truly gifted and one of the finest poets I've ever come across on this site. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Chris

2 Months Ago

You are welcome to pause anytime... speak your mind if so driven... nice meeting you.
"Woven nows that blend existence into futures past and presents that become..dreams and me's"-Chris, this is so uniquely, magnificently, you. Kaleidoscopic, moving in All directions and then, honing in, and perfectly, coming home....Master Class work. Kudos!

Posted 5 Months Ago


I am seemingly lost in the me's and sulfurous bleeding of syllables seen. Kept my breath the whole verse, and wove a delicious treat for my mind's eye. Superbly penned...

Posted 8 Months Ago


Very connected piece. It highlights the inner workings of us as humans... of how we live and love and become one with another... so to speak. The piece has a thread through it... if that makes sense. Good work...
..Misty

Posted 10 Months Ago


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So romantic and quite captivating. Your words are lush and loving. Some very memorable lines...

'as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us...
and our taste IS
the breath we exhale,'

I enjoyed this a lot. Starz

Posted 11 Months Ago


Chris

11 Months Ago

Nice having you stop-by...
This was quite romantic and beautiful indeed. :)
Seems you put allot of thought and heart into this piece :)
Great write Chris :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Chris

11 Months Ago

Thank you for pausing and sharing your time and thoughts.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Months Ago

your most welcome :)
I am amazed. The quality of your romances are superb.

Posted 1 Year Ago


its just awesome!!!.....dreams to be cherished ....

Posted 1 Year Ago


I just love this. Wonderfully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris

1 Year Ago

Thank you for pausing with me.
Neal S

1 Year Ago

Most Welcome.
Hello Chris, beautifully expressed uplifting words. Indeed dreams dwell here. R xo

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris

1 Year Ago

Hi Ray... you left thoughtful words... was this really that bad then?

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