Silent Echoes

Silent Echoes

A Poem by Chris
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Senyru

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Silent Echoes
I'm just an old fool
who cared enough to listen
to others that don't...
Chris

© 2017 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
Crickets say it all

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Now that is an awesome senyru. Maybe one of the best I've read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very simple but so powerful indeed. So many times we are the listeners and so many never listen at all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

The potency of senyru...
wow kind of like My poem.
Silent echos vibrating through the ground,
as foot steps thunder all around
sitting at home, my hart aches with the sound
of silent echos all around

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

well spoken and thought out!
Sometimes even if them have ears they cannot it choose not to hear... same as see... listening to hear instead of to answer holds much wisdom.. true words you write...rather be wise and be a fool than just a fool🌹no matter the name🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

Wisdom begins by listening to what is really being said
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

You are so right 🌹
So many hear the sounds, but often fail to understand the words.

Seems to me it's getting to be more and more of a soundbite world nowadays.

Beccy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The meaning your packed into something so simple and small is astounding.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Short and deep, exactly like what i like , i really loved it , keep it up chris :) .

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the simplicity of this listening is much more advantageous

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

Hi Savanna, thanks for pausing and listening.
I'd rather listen than talk anyways.

Spilled secrets fill my chest, for I am the leprechaun, taking your pot of gold.

Thanks for the inspiration. Enjoyed your poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

You're always welcome to pause and catch a breath ...
You get less wrinkles by smiling than you do for frowning - senyru lesson - be happy and live longer ... :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Chris

6 Years Ago

Perhaps THAT is why I "chuckle" as I do - to stay ageless...
Phill Oz O'fee

6 Years Ago

Kudos ......

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Added on May 13, 2017
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Chris

Lansing, MI



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