November...

November...

A Poem by Chris
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College town - co-eds hmmm

"

November, 2011... Light jacket - warm.  Teens with "Life-rushes" coloring their sights.

"Drop-Dead-Gorgeous..."

Sidewalk Cafe`
traffic -
walkers, joggers
meanderers - wanderers
rushing and rushing - purpose
- on purpose - for... something,

anything, another thing-reason-wish-want.

and you flowed into
existence
sight
life
a "presence" - in mid-stride your head just
turned and your eyes...
YOU looked into my eyes
reasoned glance - paused, locked-step
and I saw your "purpose"
- your choice, intent, you fully KNEW...
and then
THEN
a half-smile
and
you continued on.

I made your day -
I looked, appreciated auburn
aura
flawless
child-become-woman on a November day.

You KNOW you're drop-dead-gorgeous
now
that lil extra swing and spring
and the life-flush
...priceless.

Chris

© 2011 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
Warm day...

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Ah you flirt! making the Coeds blush as the rush to their classes. I am so jealous it hurts. I remember living in a college town and the beautiful sights that came along with it! Ah to be in Bozeman once more :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh so priceless...and expressed with beauty and a heady rush....

Peace
Shar

Posted 12 Years Ago


Don't we all want to be noticed, and just that little smile...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how you describe your surroundings and your moods on these days...very refreshing for sure.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Enjoy Your Day .. .. ..

ME.

Posted 12 Years Ago


everyone wishes someone will notice . . .

and I can't imagine any girl would see you and not smile :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nothing like appreciation for nature..all part of human nature! You've shared a delicious moment as only you can!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Warm day indeed, lol
It is always nice when someone makes your day.
Wonderful write Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago



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