"Lifescapes..."

"Lifescapes..."

A Poem by Chris
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thoughts...

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I read Pricilla Moore's "Wake Me Up".  This one fell from behind-my-eyes...

"Lifescapes... "

Retrospection.

introspection ~

"What's IT all mean?!?"

Why is the sky?

Where is blue?

Who is tomorrow?

When will I - be?

Sigh...

 

I wish so hard -

and don't even know

the whys or the fors...

just that I want -

something

more.

More than what is, was, has been.

More than I can touch, dream, wish...

more than everything.

I've got "life" - bad.

 

Chris

 


© 2011 Chris



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The "more" is what sets us apart. The wants and needs to be more, have more, feel more. This is a lovely, expressive piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sigh... on wishes & dreams....


Shar

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes, life, we breathe, but we have to mean something too...to someone,
to the world...

Posted 6 Years Ago


The "more" is what you are for. You put a name to it all, define the need, explore its depths and breadths and say its okay to feel. I feel the same. It seems that "more" has to BE and the hope keeps the hope alive.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Life is a good thing to catch .. ..

ME.

Posted 6 Years Ago


"i've got "life" - bad" - this is simply infectiously perfect!

Posted 6 Years Ago


i knew a fellow like that once...none of his zippers worked

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Great poem, loved this

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Got life"...life is something that I wish I knew the why's to...
Calculating and driven with precise quality xoxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


have I told you lately how glad I am that you found us here?

Posted 6 Years Ago



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