"Seduction..." 2

Senryu

 

"Seduction..." 2

...if I touched your cheek
would you think of touching mine
or blush so softly...

Chris

Reviews

[Captain]

This is so beautiful. The sweetest, purest seduction I've ever heard of.
'Captain

[Brittany]

I love it. Sensual.

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But of course... :)

Enchanting poetry.

[PoppySilver]

Gorgeous! Even in minimal you have the power to reduce the reader to perfect perception of such an event, wonderful xoxo

[Emma Joy]

Both, of course. You write of touch magic, mister; a sweetly sizzling senryu.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

A tender though, a touch, a blush - simply beautiful.

[Michael G.]

Sirrah says nice and playful....
possibly a shy tentative first move?
Either way, well written thought.

[joshua deathdealer]

Very sweet and subtle.

[sharonlee]

Smiles... a sweet and tempting thought. Like cherry pie too hot to touch.