You gave me a Smile

You gave me a smile,

when our beats together pounded,

not of lust or pain,

but of a courage you so gave,

 

full of charm and ease,

elegant in a silly frame,

your desire to love me has easily came,

not a thought of doubt of your true love,

together laced,

two hearts the same,

you feel of good,

you strike of love,

a purity in you as you have stood,

so little years on this god given earth and a heart of gold,

embodied of pure,

a mind so bold,

to me your heart you have sold,

 

I have not known the emotions you have,

it seems so easy yet i fell of shame,

but together you hold me hand in hand,

forever to love you as we both shall breathe and forever stand,

 

 

Author's Note

this goes out to my lovely boyfriend who showed me that its not to late to feel true love and that the past is that of the past and is forever gone. Thank you Tim.

Reviews

[moo to the world]

simply wonderful love is an awesome thing and evidently a fuel for you beautiful fire

[Cassie Fraga]

AAAAAWWWW... so sweeeeeeeet!!!

[Desmund Tiny]

nice.... I love it.... with the love felt in this poem.... ^^,

[stars are far]

ouch ..this was so sweet ....
I hope you stay together :)...great work :D