DRIFTER idea for short story #1

just an idea

Laura could drift through walls.
No, I know what you're thinking, and you're wrong, she's not a ghost.
Yes, Laura could do a lot of things. Drift through walls was just one of those things.
Once she did it in a brand new Audi.
That was the last thing she ever did actually, so I guess you could be right.
She might be a ghost but if she is, she's never bothered me.

Author's Note

What do you think? Worth pursuing?

Reviews

[Laura Almeida]

Who is laura?
Or is just a current name you use?
I liked it already, by now I read alot of your stuff.. and I like your writting style. I was excited already for this story

So in answer to your question, I do think is worth pursuing and if you do, I will read it for sure

Thank you for sharing

[-inactive now-]

First line had me thinking: 'this is gunna be interesting.."
Next sentence had me thinking "ok, maybe she's got a superpower?"
Nope. The last part was a nice humourous little twist.
You have quite the imagination and talent for writing.
Good on ya :)

[Stan Lee]

Aha! Someone read it the way I wanted! Very glad (and relieved) that you found the twist humorous. I really appreciate your very kind review. :) Thank you Josiah!!!

[Darius Greeves]

I like the idea. Story sounds like it could be being through the eyes of a child which is interesting. You should definitely go for it.

[Stan Lee]

Thank you Darius. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. :)

[Solar]

Clever lines convey an incident and the shade of a story. As it stands or expands - both would make an interesting read.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks so much Solar. I appreciate your kind review. You're right, it conveys an incident, there's more to this story... this is just a skeleton. :) Thank you!!!!

[Woody]

quite intriguing, whether a ghost or not. so yeah, go for it, Andronicus.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks for your encouragement Woody :)

[Robert Parlange]

Looks good. There are a lot of thinks you can do with this. Go for it.

[Stan Lee]

Thanks for reading Robert. :)

[alifeacoustic]

Yes. I wanna know more about her. And the scenario of real life being seen through ghostly eyes could be very entertaining indeed. Just think of all the possibilities open to her. Do it, do it, do it :)

[Stan Lee]

haha. Thank you. Thank you. Just lacking initiative to write up my ideas these days, that and lack of free time... thanks for reading :)