brainy ink

brainy ink

A Poem by Angel Bird
"

just a dream ...

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- brain of liquid ink
- exhaling through my pen
- words compiled neatly
- confined in my head

- biding the right breath
- unshackling release
- sailing in a vessel of ink
- onto a virgin paper sea

- cruising for a while - aimlessly
- lining up as it seems - randomly
- spreading happiness by
- marrying - paper and ink

- conceiving philosophy and poesy
- shamelessly absorbed by eyes
- in different colors
- find themselves in

- heads and minds
- exquisite audiences applauding
- editors contending at my feet
- words sheltered in a harbor

- amidst a brainy storm
- all of a sudden � famous as men
- for accomplishing �greatness`
- my blood turned blue as ink �


© 2008 Angel Bird



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'Brainy Ink'... such a great title and thought. I really enjoyed absorbing these words. The final three stanzas are my favourite, particularly the lines 'absorbed by eyes/in different colors/find themselves in/heads and minds' and 'exquisite audiences applauding'. Nice one. NH

Posted 11 Years Ago


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what a lovely dream this is and the write is also very good. I enjoyed the read. Barbara

Posted 5 Years Ago


Such a unique way of looking at thoughts, and the color of our imagination... There is a depth and beauty moving so freely here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"My blood turned blue as ink."
Wonderful job and the poem its self potrays your work of art. Keep it up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a powerful imaginative write

Well done

Dalebear

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicely presented in poetic prose. Writers are compelled to write .
May your dreams come true

Posted 8 Years Ago


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wow I don't really mean anything mean but in the end you sound full of yourself, but almost like you dont need the brain an you are no longer an element but that it's just the pen and ink. Does that make sense?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Ry
My oh my oh my!
This is such a great, creative poem!
I love it!
-Eli

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This piece was breathtaking. I could close my eyes and smell the ink, and the paper, and feel the violent tossing of the stormy sea. Very well thought out, and I love the title, as well. It called to me amidst the list of poems and stories entered in my contest. I'm glad I read this one first. I've always loved metaphors involving storms and the sea. my favorite lines in this were: 'words sheltered in a harbor'/'amidst a brainy storm' ....and 'for accomplishing greatness'/'my blood turned blue as ink' Those lines alone, say so much. Very clever with the last one, though...Bluebloods...ha! I love it. You've made it to the finals!



Posted 9 Years Ago


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That's great. :) I think sometimes we might share the same brain...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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It's very inspirational and philosophical ... Nice flow
~Kavish~

Posted 10 Years Ago


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