brainy ink

brainy ink

A Poem by Angel Bird
"

just a dream ...

"






- brain of liquid ink
- exhaling through my pen
- words compiled neatly
- confined in my head

- biding the right breath
- unshackling release
- sailing in a vessel of ink
- onto a virgin paper sea

- cruising for a while - aimlessly
- lining up as it seems - randomly
- spreading happiness by
- marrying - paper and ink

- conceiving philosophy and poesy
- shamelessly absorbed by eyes
- in different colors
- find themselves in

- heads and minds
- exquisite audiences applauding
- editors contending at my feet
- words sheltered in a harbor

- amidst a brainy storm
- all of a sudden � famous as men
- for accomplishing �greatness`
- my blood turned blue as ink �

© 2008 Angel Bird


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'Brainy Ink'... such a great title and thought. I really enjoyed absorbing these words. The final three stanzas are my favourite, particularly the lines 'absorbed by eyes/in different colors/find themselves in/heads and minds' and 'exquisite audiences applauding'. Nice one. NH

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is a nice little poem, but not very funny. The contest was for funny things. I'll make you a finalist, for now but if something funnier comes up...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the image of editors contending at the feet of the inky writer. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting philosophy/concept. This is what I like to call "brain food." thank you for feeding my brain today.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the sea, this was very insperational. I even like storms now that I think of it. This has a nice flow to it, and the metaphor was very creative. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is like nothing I've ever encountered. Very original.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope you win this contest. very good. I like this line the best:

sailing in a vessel of ink
- onto a virgin paper sea

nice job. great how you can take such a random idea and make it your own.

kena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I really dug this piece. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck in the voting!

jkb

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Feels like reading this for the first time
insight reflecting what defines the shine
in light of inspiration-what i admire
most is the precise thought as
passion felt in every "beautifully" placed word.
soulfully metaphorical

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

spreading happiness by
- marrying - paper and ink

I absolutely love the flowing form and meaning
you've given this writing
it defines muses in many ways
"brainy ink"
that is clever
because it speaks to the heart in metaphor.

the writing itself is beautifully done. loved it
has an inspiring effect, thanks for sharing such talent



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, interesting flow of words

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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