For there's a little angel in your heart

For there's a little angel in your heart

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Song lyrics

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Here you stand in front of me

Not believing in a future

You are even shaking

 

A lonely tear glistens on your cheek

Hate reflecting on your face

Against this world - please - look at me

 

 

For there's a little angel in your heart

I can see it through your eyes

It is the little angel within you

That makes you so beautiful

 

 

Why don't you understand

That I know who you are

Deep down within your soul

 

Please take my hand 

I reach out to you

Just give me a smile

 

 

For there's a little angel in your heart

I can see it through your eyes

It is the little angel within you

That makes you so beautiful

 

 

Why can't I touch you

As so badly I want

At night when I lie sleepless

 

Dreaming of your enticing lips

My heart is breaking

With every thump it cries

 

 

For there's a little angel in your heart

I can see it through your eyes

It is the little angel within you

That makes you so beautiful

 

 

I only live for you - my love

My heart lies before you

Like an open book

 

Pages filled with thoughts of you

Everywhere your name, and I long

To tell you, - but you ..don't care..

 

 

For there's a little angel in your heart

I can see it through your eyes

It is the little angel within you

That makes you so beautiful

 

...

 

(Copyrighted material)

 


© 2010 Angel Bird



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Wow so very touching... sometimes we need to let those we love know how special they are or they will never see it...

For there's a little angel in your heart
I can see it through your eyes
It is the little angel within you
That makes you so beautiful

that chorus really shines bright with graceful love.
I think this is my fav from you so far.

Posted 9 Years Ago


10 of 10 people found this review constructive.




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This is very motivational, very touching! I love it, I could hear my heart beating faster and faster as I read! Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I was pleasantly surprised by the veracity of this well structured poem. We discover what we really are deep inside through our reflection emanating from the Other. You have a great talent. It should be a song.

When Selene reflects Apollo
he discovers his true self
through her amber eyes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They do say that eyes are the windows to the soul.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For there's a little angel in your heart

I can see it through your eyes

It is the little angel within you

That makes you so beautiful



I agree with that. Everyone has that good thing inside us, which sometimes we are not aware of. By that, we have our little angel in our heart and some people would feel it.

Great composition. Hope to hear the song playing over the radio these coming days, weeks, months, or years.... because that is a very nice song. Who knows?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful lyric!

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very well written and structured song, this NEEDS to be recorded :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Bird

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Yes I'd like it to be recorded. :)
Sam Gregory

4 Years Ago

RECORD IT NOWW!! haha
I love this piece.
I particularly like the chorus.
The emotion of the piece is sweet and the diction helps to emphasize that.
There are a few grammatical errors as far as punctuation is concerned, but other than that, this is a great song.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very sweet poem ^_^

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your writing didn't seem to have many errors besides punctuations that just don't play a part but in your poetry but, other then that your writing was flawless and great. Love your repetition of a "For there's a little angel in ...." Anyways your poetry was lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a song I think it has merit, especially if the voice and melody are sweet. But for me, as a poem, It's got a nice message, but is hard to make it flow easily when I read it.

With music the notes can be held longer to give it rhythm, so precise meter doesn't matter as much...so I like it I just can't read it well :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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