My love is a burden

My love is a burden

A Poem by Angel Bird
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Song lyrics

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  - Your eyes magically sparkle
  - when they look into his
  - until they reach mine
  - and go blank without shine
  - You once used to love me 
  - so hard letting go of thee

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - You looked so lovely 
  - wind playing in your hair
  - at the beach don't you remember
  - when oh so happy we were?
  - Honeymoon full of love and promise
  - there's so much I'm gonna miss

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - We live together still
  - but the void in you
  - I no longer fill
  - My body aches so bad 
  - as I helplessly watch me
  - slipping out of your heart

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

  - He stole your heart
  - despite your vow 

  - no need for pretence
  - It cuts my strengths  
  - for I'll have to let you go
  - because I love you so...

 

  - My love is a burden
  - of yours - I know,
  - I can't help it
  - but loving you so
  - hair tip to toe

 

(Copyrighted material)

 

© 2014 Angel Bird


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Letting someone go cause you love them is the hardest thing we humans have to face I believe. I would love to hear this put to music. I think it would really bring out the life just out of reach behind the expertly inked words.

Makes me wish I had learned how to play the piano years ago....

A great work of effort and skill!
Tara M Stone

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Well done not errors, I love the way your writing was written, and all and all it was good as you described the love between two people as one feels its a burden and the other feels they can never stop loving you anyways. Excellent job using repetitions of "My love is a burden." Anyways keep up the magnificent writing as the more you do the more you improve.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Ugh~having to let go is hard. Incredibly hard. This is really moving and sweet. The feel of longing is so prominent here. Its also so raw and romantic... This is really gorgeous. Good work~

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Heartwarming poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart warming and heart felt!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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. poignant beyond measure ... and so amazingly moving and mesmerizing from start to finish ... oh, this is all heart ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wow, this is definitely a touching and heart-breaking piece. I love it, you can feel his seriousness, and sense her irritation.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sadness is such a bitter pill and those who have it want to get rid of it Yet no one wants to take it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a sadly moving, longing write.. lingering in the shadow of once was.. wishing it could all be there again.. You express such pain through this emotionally moving song.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Love doesn't care much for the sparing of other people's feelings, does it?
It is one of the strongest things in the world, I think.
Great poem. Beautiful
-Eli

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Tender mercies all around, a lovely write.

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