shining caress

shining caress

A Poem by Angel Bird
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thoughts to a beautiful sunset

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Simply breathtaking every time again

to witness such an intimate and romantic moment

between these two marvelous lovers

when the powerful and burning hot sun

caresses over our constantly striving earth,

where the fire deep down inside 

brings even the glacial ice to melt,

and at the peak of their loving embrace

the world gracefully blushes

in the most beautiful shades of red…

 

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© 2014 Angel Bird



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This is beautifully innocent. I like the feeling I have when I read this. To feel 'sexually', when one experiences sun, is amazing. This ambiguity is what I love. Such a perfect poem you wrote..And in terms, es ist nicht deine Sprache, ich schätze es um so mehr; nur jemand, wer mehrere Sprachen spricht, sie lebt und untersucht, kann digest such a poetry written by non native speaker. Die Beweisusschließlichkeit kam down zu Null. Just innocence.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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CONGRATULATIONS FOR WINNING AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST FOR FATHER SUN.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a scene of arousal, love, and beauty. good job :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exquisite metaphors-Love it. Short yet filled with a lot of value. Keep it up! :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe that is so beautiful to even to compare to a sunset of such a love. Wonderful job.=D

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely nature about love in the poem thankyou for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a painted masterpiece of words, defining colors and emotion... Beautifully confessed, your words bring to life a world of fire and ice in graceful blush...

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

words for the mind and soul refreshing like mountain air

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I was lucky I got to see many morning sun rising and sunset on the coat of California. It took your breath away. The gifts of nature are for us to see and feel if we are wise. The poem is beautiful. The description took me to the sea and the falling sun. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Lovely nature inspired innocent piece about love....don't ever stop writing....your usage of the sun to evoke emotion..is phenomenal

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is beautifully innocent. I like the feeling I have when I read this. To feel 'sexually', when one experiences sun, is amazing. This ambiguity is what I love. Such a perfect poem you wrote..And in terms, es ist nicht deine Sprache, ich schätze es um so mehr; nur jemand, wer mehrere Sprachen spricht, sie lebt und untersucht, kann digest such a poetry written by non native speaker. Die Beweisusschließlichkeit kam down zu Null. Just innocence.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 4, 2010
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Tags: sunset, hot, shining, earth, world, sun, caress, red

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Angel Bird
Angel Bird

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