TEDDY BEAR

TEDDY BEAR

A Poem by Angel Bird

 

 

 - Teddy bear, my sweet teddy bear

 

 - Every moment, good and bad you share

 

 - Dice however they fall, you care

 

 - Deities never replace you in any despair


 - Yes in my arms all my tears you bear

 

 

 

 - Born out of daddy's old flare

 

 - Every hole, mommy knows to repair

 

 - A constant smile on your face you wear

 

 - Reassuring you will always be there





(copyrighted material)

 

 

© 2015 Angel Bird


Author's Note

Angel Bird
Acrostic with monorhyme
Mixed forms

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This piece was heartwarming...
Made me smile..
Thank You
Debbie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Really good littel piece, reminded me of my younger years when I too had a little teddy bear.

Thank you so much for bringing these memories back to me.

Cute but quite powerful piece.

Mark.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is pretty good, Angel Bird. Where you been? I miss you.

What kind of teddy bear do you have? Do you have a teddy bear?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Angel Bird

2 Years Ago

Thanks very much. Yes of course I have two favorite Teddies from my childhood. Still have them. I'm .. read more
Sometimes something so small, like a teddy bear, can become so meaningful and help us in life. Great piece!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel Bird

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind comment. I truly appreciate.
The Archangel Gabriel

2 Years Ago

I have always appreciate you, Angel Bird. Not a problem. The pleasure was all mine.
it shows that not just religous belifes can heal a person but as well as somthing so meaningful help heal a person.... as always you show the truth and more.... it makes me miss preschool when i could nap and eat and play have to worry about nothing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah~this is so adorable. Brings back all the childhood memories. One should never lose their childish innocence and this projects it amazingly. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reading this poem is
Like a breathe of tranquility
On a very stressful day
Where migraine headache
Rules the day.



Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww so sweet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good piece. Shows reliability, protection, and warmth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 19, 2010
Last Updated on July 7, 2015
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