Free write 2: Angela

Free write 2: Angela

A Story by Angel Marie Antoinette

Another free write... just posted because it was getting moldy on my computer... About Angela... This is more like a long story short.


A woman with a heart to small was joined to a man with a heart too big and two became three and so on, but the woman could only pick one to love and only one so she picked the man and she set forth breaking his heart to smaller or die she would be the one he loved and one to want her, so the ones she created like her she hid away so he would never know their love, the rest she picked at until there was nothing but flaws left...but he loved them all the more because they were his and proof of his love to his wife...he loved them more because he knew she could not... he cared not for being loved back because he knew that wasn't what love was about..and in the end he lost her, if only in the way of feeling her sleep beside him, but he loved her across rivers and seas...and he could not help but love

© 2008 Angel Marie Antoinette

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that is heartbreaking and beautiful. i can't...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hi Angel! This is beautiful in a way that inspires sorrow and understanding. I love the underones of your work! What else ya got :)!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Angel Marie Antoinette
Angel Marie Antoinette

The City of blah, MD

I'm 26 going on 16, not immature, just insecure like a bare foot child lost in the jungle I'm map-less, but hopeful that I'll figure it out one day, when I learn to cross that highway I call my mind .. more..