I HATE

I HATE

A Poem by AngelAfterlife

I hate the way i sneeze

it sounds like a mouse

I hate the way laugh

it sounds like chipmunk

I hate the way my body is

I cant fit in a size 12

I hate the way i smile

my teeth look like rocks.

 

I hate they way you kiss

it makes me melt

I hate the way you hold me

i feel so safe in your arms.

I hate the way you look me in the eyes

my heart skips a beat

i hate the way you hold my hand

i never wanted to let go.

 

I hate the way you say i love you

when your with someone else

I hate the way you came home

smelling like my best friend.

I hate the way you said i'm sorry

when you never truley ment it.

I hate the way you make me feel

like i'm worth nothing

I hate the way you climb into bed

thinking i dont know

 

I EXPECIALLY HATE THE WAY YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU

© 2011 AngelAfterlife


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This is so sad. I can't imagine how it must feel to have someone you love so much betray you like that. I'm glad you were able to put it into words and release some of that emotion, and I hope that you're healing well. Not all men are jerks!!! There are some really good ones out there :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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extrodinary!!! very powerful and full of imagery.... very well written^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good rant/poem. A lot of sadness and anger in this. If I may suggest stagger the lines for effect. You will get people to read this differently that way. This is good. Could even be presented as three separate poems. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sad. I can't imagine how it must feel to have someone you love so much betray you like that. I'm glad you were able to put it into words and release some of that emotion, and I hope that you're healing well. Not all men are jerks!!! There are some really good ones out there :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. I feel like this a lot! And It's ery amazing(: Great emotion. Favorites!

Posted 12 Years Ago


no Balls:) she wasnt my best friend...

Bradley.. have you ever heard the song Whisky Lullaby??? well i feel like that song

*She never could get drunk enough to get him off her mind*

Posted 12 Years Ago


ah, that bittersweet aftertaste, never goes away even with a swig of whiskey

Posted 12 Years Ago


im really sorry about your situation (apparently she wasnt a best friend)
but this was good. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


thank you... this poem is about my ex fiance who cheated on me with my best friend...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good. I like the love/hate interplay.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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AngelAfterlife
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