I miss you

I miss you

A Poem by Girl With A Pen
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A dedication to my great grandmother R.I.P

"
I miss you
There is no one to talk to
So I guess I'll stay here
And rot by your headstone

Only you
You understood me when I didn't even understand myself
You made me think that I could be normal

When kids tortured me
And made me cry
I would cry in your arms
I never felt so safe
But now you're gone

I scream at your grave
I want you to scream back!
I know you are there
Even if your heart no longer beats
I would rather hear you yell at me
Then rot here by your stone

You're gone
And I'm alone
I'm tracing your name on the stone
But you can't see me can you?

I've been talking for hours
But you're not even listening!
I miss you and you can't hear me
Only the stone can  feel me

I miss you...


 

© 2014 Girl With A Pen


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This really spoke to me I
understand how this feels I felt this
way with my Grandfather he was my angel
best friend and hero.


Very Beautiful Emotional piece.


Thank you for sharing this Wonderful piece.

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Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl With A Pen

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) You a a great help
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet



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it made my eye tear,i loved it,i totally can relate thank you for putting your feelings and mine in this wonderful peice..great one!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent this poetry shows how much you miss that person may his soul rest in piece..:(

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so touching ...this one got to me


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"you're gone and i'm alone...tracing your name on the stone"
Oh this line..touched my heart...may favourite one..
This is amazing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl With A Pen

9 Years Ago

Aw thank you. I'm glad you liked it
Anahat

9 Years Ago

pleasure's all mine :)
it is a poem about a grave

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl With A Pen

9 Years Ago

Yes. It's about me talking to my great grandmother's grave
This really spoke to me I
understand how this feels I felt this
way with my Grandfather he was my angel
best friend and hero.


Very Beautiful Emotional piece.


Thank you for sharing this Wonderful piece.

How do you add a You tube video on a poem????

well first you need to go to You tube and fine that
video you want then when you get to the page where the video
is at click under it where it says share then click on Embed then
Check the top box that says show Suggested videos when the video finishes
then check the bottom box that says use old embed code.

then you copy and Paste it into the Author's note box there
when you're trying to post a poem I hope this Helps :)

and copy and paste if you don't know that. it might already be High lighted with blue so you right click on your computer mouse and go down to copy then paste the URL from the You tube to copy you left click on your computer mouse and you'll see it blue highlighted I wasn't sure if you knew how to copy in paste if you did I apologize.





Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl With A Pen

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) You a a great help
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet
Very touching poem. The emotion is truly felt in this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


that was amazing!!!! losing someone close is one of the hardest things ever!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2014
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Tags: Family, Sad, Death