The blade.....it talks to me

What I just almost did just now

The blade....it talks to me

It tells me

"I can ease your pain

Make you whole again

Make those who hurt you

Now hurt worse

I can make the pain to your heart

Stop completely

 

Just let me taste your sweet skin

Your oh so sweet skin across my sharp teeth

I want to taste your skin

Your so very sweet skin

 

Don't be afraid

You've done it before

I love when you kneel down

Holding....

Bleeding....

 

Oh it makes me so happy

Having your sweet sweet blood upon my cold steel

Won't you make me happy again?

Won't you let me taste that crimson liquid once more?

 

I'm your only friend now

All the other's have left you

All those you gave your feelings too

They left you, but I have never left you

 

Can't you see I love you?

I want to ease your pain

I want to see your sweet tears fall down around me

As my sharp razor teeth sink into your sweet skin

Piercing it, making the crimson liquid gush out

Oh!"

 

Let's finish what you've started long ago

I only wish for your true happiness

And you aren't happy here...

Please....let's go away together...

Just let me....take a bite...

That's what it said to me

His words are sweet

But my heart....it speaks to me as well

 

"Don't let his cunning words fool you

He does not care for your happiness

He just wants you as another victim in his plans

 

It is not true what he says

You have people who love you,

Who care for you,

Do not let him win

 

I beg you please

Do not let him taste you

Make him suffer

Do not give in

 

Put him back where he belongs

Let his words pass through you

Show him we are strong together

 

Come now and rest

He may have won the battle

But he will never win this war

 

You belong here

You will find love again

You will find happiness again

Just hold on.....hold on

After listening to both

Which should I choose

For now I choose to rest

Live another day.....

But what will tomorrow hold

Will he speak to me again?

 

I do not know 

But for now he lost 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

This is very well written, in this regards, I reall liked how the oppositions played of of each other,
also, when the blade is talking, as if its romancing, the entire image is incrediblely dark and sinister,

and one can feel the intensity of the seduction, as well as morbid chaos of confliction, heartaching
in its convincing feature, I would hate to see anybody suffering from such condition of worthlessness

the powerful imagery works well, and plays on the readers thoughts, as well as the colors used
for the font, the meaning is sinister yet takes an realization tone of focus, peaceful and calmed.

Really nice job, I really enjoyed reading the artfulness of it all.
Take Care, Mike

[Otsana]

I really like the way you have structured and written this because it really shows the battle that goes on inside you when a dilemma like this comes along. I really hope that you are holding on because it is worth it in the end. Great write!

[r]

i have problems with cutting too.. its addicting isnt it? well great piece and good luck in my contest depression