Elder Sister

When you sister crys in you lap all you can do is tell the truth

I was you long ago

I had tears in my eyes

I was betrayed by the one I loved

But it’ll get better

It’ll take time

But I’m telling you

You’re strong

You’re beautiful

You’ll love again and again

You’ll have your heart broken

This time might be the first but is not the last

But with every break you’ll get stronger

You’ll get wiser

By the time you find the one

He will have been through what you have been trough

He’ll know how  to cherish you

And Love you More than anyone else in the world.

Then you’ll remember my words

Then you’ll kiss my cheek

I’ll hug you like just now

But then you’ll be smiling

Love you Sis

I’ll say

Love you too

You’ll answer

Author's Note

I wrote this when my younger sister had her first heart break... Hope you like it...

Reviews

[ANM]

Heartfelt and beautifully put together!

[s y e]

This was a lovely thing to write for your sister during her time of need... It is horrible when your heart has broken by someone you once loved.

[RAOrourke]

Wonderfully written and flowed very nicely. Such true sentiments that the heartbroken don't hear until they find the one! Well done!

[Matching Socks]

Those are very sweet words for your little sister. :)

[Pax]

ahh, a very good offering my friend, siblings are a treasure to be kept tight, family matters and it is important part of our growth... great job!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Awe How sweet I am the youngest in my family.

Big sisters and older brothers Siblings are such blessings
from God.


Thank you for sharing this sweet gentle loving piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

This is beautiful. Ive never been an older sister but I have 3 nephews who hopefully will listen to my advice. Love this

[Chris Micha]

Very beautifully written. You did an amazing job expressing your sympathy for her and I'm sure she appreciates it! :)

[kublakhan27]

Painfully beautiful...you clearly have a wonderful bond with your sister...I wish you both the best...lovely and truly moving words Rose.

[just Penny]

What a lovely sister you are ! It shows the bond you have. Wonderful words, so valuable. Nicely done. Penny