Synchronism

Written many years ago when I wrote poetry daily , now I rarely do.

Poetry
Synchronism is found in Poetry.
Sinking into the paleness of words once removed
Walking over paths in the rich terrain of one dimensional matter.

Being drenched in a familiar brainwave.
Words solidify and become mass and someday
fame of perhaps infamy.

There is recognition that seems like substance but is merely a shared thought
seeming tangible because of invisible parallels, which say, I am, I have been, I will be written in tomes and carried in memories.

I move forward or digress and words capture and release me.
I see poets in their solitude and I pose for a moment in the same frame.

The poet was a painter and a architect.
The poet was the wave and the sand on which the wave broke.
The poet was the sun , the moon and the stars.
The poet was whatever she touched and everything became
the poetry.

Naomi Montana












 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Poetry

Poetry always give me a pain
Because I have nowhere to go
There is nothing I can gain
Poetry should really flow

There ! I have shown the world
and all the good reviewers that poetry
belongs to Naomi.
I would love to write her a great review
But, you have to know what it`s about
And this sweet lady wrote a poem
That captures all the nuances of proper
literature, done in a gifted style and manner
to the envy of poets everywhere.

My rating : 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Michael X]

wow this is beautiful and I really enjoyed where you took the reader,
and the peaseful flow and passionate, artful and timeless meaning, you did a fantastic job!

[deeps]

This is so wonderful i like your style
I love your last stanza
Well written, and enjoayble read.

[KatieDaray]

I agree with Rachel Durison, good job

[New]

I move forward or digress and words capture and release me.
I see poets in their solitude and I pose for a moment in the same frame.

My favorite are the above two lines! Very true! Grrrreaaaat piece of work! Thanks so much for sharing!