Deluge

Deluge

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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this is fairly new ..one of my favorites

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You are a deluge ..
I bare you lightly…
You are a solemn oath between my deity and me.
You stand. as if singular.

A world quakes in your wake.

 You hold kisses that should crown me like a saint.
And surely, you are blessed 
You are a deluge.
You just don't know it…
I heavy rain a hurricane.
That should storm the shores of this raging sea in me.
I must bare you lightly…
For you are deluge…
Should you ever choose to be free, I would let you drown me..
We would rise on the crest of your intensity.
You would find your faith in me…
I am a deluge, you bare me lightly..
A solemn oath between you and your deity…

I hold kisses that would crown you as a saint,
Surely I am blessed.
Naomi Montana

© 2009 Naomi Montana Walsh


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this is beautifully expressed and celestial in thought, a deluge to be carried as a feather,
as if the entirety of such is blissful growing in the happenstanceof missing and misery being overcome
by memory and amagical love that succeeds suffering, I really like the depth and scope
of thought put forth in form, its passionate, thanks mfor sharing your talent Naomi

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this one i think it is wonderful and beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 16, 2009

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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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