"To the Nothingness"

"To the Nothingness"

A Poem by Jola

 

For Nothingnesses so that you get to know a sweet taste of love

so that you never embrace me solitudes so that you never know my name

so that you never pull me to the shadow.

Give me the moment of the life short so that I sail to feel by boat,

let loves the sea will engulf me, because my heart is on fire...

 

© 2009 Jola


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I really enjoyed this poem. If I could write with such fire for so many words I wouod consider myself a poet not a wanna be. This poem is awesome and thought provoking. I feel the emotion of determine joy. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful poem, so warm and heartfelt, your an amazing writer

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This very complex poem deserves a second inspection as there are many ambiguities within it,well done for attempting to write one which is for the love of a cherished one and how your words seem sweet for his love is like the boat which you cradle within the seas of love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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