MEMORY / PAMIĘĆ

MEMORY / PAMIĘĆ

A Poem by Jola
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"Let us love people now they leave us so fast the shoes remain empty and the phone rings..."/ks.Jan Twardowski

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MEMORY
For you the sun has already faded 
Everywhere is a cold
Not hear the speech ...
Words were unfinished
You gave so much joy for all 
Loved life so much 
You gone but not wanted
God took you for himself
Because he had other plans to you
Gosiu but today you aren't with us...
Memories of you still alive
So I do not say goodbye
But See you later!!!


PAMIĘĆ

Dla Ciebie zgasło już słońce
Wszędzie Panuje chłód
Nie słychać mowy...
Niedokończone słowa zostały
Tyle wszystkim dawałaś radości
Życie tak bardzo kochałaś
Odeszłaś chociaż nie chciałaś
Bóg zabrał Ciebie do siebie
Bo wobec Ciebie miał inne plany
Gosiu choć już Ciebie dziś z nami nie ma ...
Wspomnienie o Tobie wciąż żyje
Ja nie mówię żegnaj
Lecz do zobaczenia później!!!


© 2009 Jola



Author's Note

Jola
This poem dedicated to my friend Gosi who passed away December 23, 2009

Sorry for my not best English language

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This is both a beautiful poem and true tribute to your dear friend .. in a few words you've said everything that needs to be said.

People we care about whose physical presence disappears from our lives nevertheless stay with us forever .. thank the dear Lord for sweet and happy memories.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a beautiful dedication... letting go but not saying goodbye.. holding to the memories and the hope of what lies ahead. Such a poignant write...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This a beautiful sentiment, sad, but you written it well. I love the last line too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

{@}--,-'----

they never go away as long as we keep them immortal with our love and memory.
beautiful tribute...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Roy
I have known what it's like to lose a loved one. Please accept my condolences.

Loved the ending: the glimmer of optimism that supports a person through his/her darkest times ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is both a beautiful poem and true tribute to your dear friend .. in a few words you've said everything that needs to be said.

People we care about whose physical presence disappears from our lives nevertheless stay with us forever .. thank the dear Lord for sweet and happy memories.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

English was very good. Poem was so beautiful and sad. With the photos words came alive. I loved the last line. But, I will see later. Need to hold on to good friends memories. If we are lucky we will see them again.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A good poem speaks clearly in
any language. This poem speaks
loud and clear.

Beautiful !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm so sorry for your loss. This was such a beautiful poem that it brought tears to my eyes.
' So I do not say goodbye
But See you later!!!'

Wonderful write Jola.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am sorry for your loss.
And this was a beautiful tribute.
May the new year bring you joy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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