Ragdoll Desires

Have no idea what this crap is. Just couldn't think of a decent poem.. ps. was thinking about Coraline when this was written

If no one cares about me,
does that make me an abandoned rag doll?

With nothing but a stitched smile,
sown onto my strange face.

Staring into the everlasting abyss
with my black button eyes.

Slowly loosing hope that someone will see me
Wishing i could simply walk away from all this

Never feeling the adrenaline of running and playing
Never to wander into the world again.

Despair in every corner of my twisted mind
Feeling so desolate and desperate

To be ever so silent,
speaking of no regret
that eats away at my innocence.

hmm, i suppose so...

Since i am already their deserted rag doll
i suppose i must live with it until that faithful day comes

Reviews

[Black-Draped]

awww sounds so gloomy but i wont treat yah like a ragdoll bud bud xD

[Wandering Violet]

good question. An unwanted doll is soon forgotten about - are people just as shallow about their friends and lovers? Sadly, yes.

An excellent idea that you skillfully wove into an very good poem. Nice work!

[Brianna Brie]

Great images. Love the rag doll angle. :)

[Silent Nightmare]

Awwhe it so goood :D

[Rainbow Silhouette]

OooO very dark and cute with the different big words ;D i like that this poem didn't scare the bejeebers out of me like Coraline did ^~^

[Hater of Haters]

i guess this is relatible in ways and i like how you used different words that aren't kiddie. i also really like these 2 lines "With nothing but a stitched smile sown onto my strange face", i like how its written differently than other poems i've read. anyway, good job man.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like it....it was cute the way it was related to Coraline...i think some of us live in a world like it where we aren't accepted and feel like we are there just to be pushed around.... great job getting that thought through