Cracked Window

don't wanna sound all like spoiled little girl who wants a perfect life it was just based off a dream i had a few days ago. Ps.in the dream the kids did die by the way..people in my school can ask who

It's cracking
the window of sanity
all i could see were people i knew throwing rocks
at the top right window
like it was a toy
or something to be played with
and slowly it cracked and cracked

In at one single moment
the window just broke

The pieces of glass
falling upon the foolish children
thinking the window had no significance
But it did have power

But they probably broke the window so quickly because
The window was so thin

Author's Note

try to find the true meaning...i dare you >:3

Reviews

[Black-Draped]

super cool stuff nd liked the last 2 lines best!!!!!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The meaning of this is that even if things look harmless they can cause a lot of harm to a person without them knowing the consequences. Great poem.

[Dove]

The title caught my attention right away. My favorite part of this poem was the little twist at the end. You did a great job on this one.

[Sweet Silver Lining]

i love it! this title would be good for a book or something but overall i really liked the dark twist at the end.