Colorblind

The sensuality of lovers

 

Devoid of color

I sense you in the darkness

learning the language of

your body by Braille

feeling my way across

the sea of waving

silk and cotton until

in a flash of fire

my fingertips

find their way

to your skin

 

and we dance

 

beneath the stars

of our own universe,

weightless

transitioning

shedding our skin

like bark peeling

from white tree trunks

until we are

bare

 

and we persuade

 

the night to leave us

allow us, give us

the time to explore the

depths of seas unnamed

where forever

is more than a promise

and the sound

of words is sung

through treetops glazed

with the moisture

of love  

Reviews

[Emily B]

oh, wow! Just amazing. I wish that I could have written it--you took me there so completely!

[bluessadmood]

oh what words ,oh night leave us,we want to explore depths of sea unnamed,where forever is more than a promise, what more can i say ,just beautiful as ever

[vindictivesunshine]

I love the intense progression through the whole piece.
"beneath the stars of our own universe, weightless transitioning shedding our skin like bark peeling from white tree trunks until we are bare" this part was just priceless to me. You're a great writer. Thanks for sharing.

[KUFU]

I damn near cried at the beauty of this piece...i'm such a b***h for brilliantly pened poetry...hehe.

This goes to my favs!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow what divine passion and soft sexuality stem from this piece... truly amazing work... I am stunned and speechless.

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Ooh, a sensual one. "In a flash of fire my fingertips find their way to your skin." A nice touch of friskiness, that's always good. lol.
The last five lines are incredibly amazing. I don't even quite understand exactly the meaning behind those words yet, but it doesn't matter, just the sound of those words is pleasing. You know that's something special when you feel an effect, any kind of effect before you even understand the meaning of what's being read, or said. I just love that.