To The Person Who Did Wrong To Her!

Its a message to the person whom she considered the most significant one in her life but he didn't consider it. And here's what she has to say to him!

Here's to tell the person whom she had considered the utmost intimate in her life

The one who broke her heart

Shattered the soft and innocent soul of her in pieces

What did you think you do to her?

To you, it might seem you have won making her feel weak and worthless

You may have won making her cry...cry to the core that she thought she is useless 

Make her see herself as the cruelest girl in the world

Well, let me tell you

Yes, she did feel low by your actions

She was hurt by your wrong doings

As she was accepting all the bad you told her 

But there were her angel friends- friends whom she had known for a long time and those whom she met recently

Although she did a grave mistake of not identifying such a scoundrel and his family

But through the course of her journey, she did stumble upon some true friends

They were her guiding angels- those who supported her... through the rough times

Those who knew her well and enlightened her about her strengths, her positive side

The flame that died out in your company

Yes, her friends had helped to ignite the new flame within her

They motivated, stood her by, they kept their promise of a true friend

They took the actions that had been promised by you 

You never turned back to find out how she was!

And whenever you did, it was just to ensure that she was suffering

Well, now all that she want to tell you is

Never ever think bad for others since God will return back all that we do for others

I guess it's high time you understand not to double the grievance of others

Rather if you could not help them, leave them alone so they could figure out a solution themselves

You were enjoying the pain and suffering of others due to your own actions

Yes, that will cost you badly or is it that you are already suffering from your Karma?

Well, whatever your situation is at present

Do not, I repeat, do not knock the door you have once closed it yourself

For not only did you hurt her poor innocent soul

You already know what else damages you did to her!

All she want to tell you is

Keep moving on or rather go with the flow

She still remember the last wisdom words you told her

The ones that she will have to live and move on without him

And now she is living on and moving on... yes without you!

With those precious people who had struggled to find the broken pieces of her soul and putting her back together

She now do not think of her past or you anymore

She now knows her worth and do not ever let any other creature like you to create drama in her life

For she is no more of herself the one you have known for so long

She is now stronger, braver and mightier than you have ever known

Now she may withstand even the worst of the thunderstorms herself

For she now knows that facing the mighty fears with courage 

And hopes to watch the colorful rainbows

She is no more the one you knew would shiver even with the loudest you shout at her, hurled abuses or made her feel inferior

She now knows you well, yes, very well!

She do not curse the person who did wrong to her

Rather she feel sorry for you and your family

She feel so sorry that your mother was not treated as a queen ever

Nor did your sister ever treated as a princess

And that was what reflected in your actions- the way you treated her

She feels sorry for you, for your upbringing

For after all there was not a single time she could feel safe when you were around her

Rather you were the one who was a threat to her being a female

Blame game do not yield a solution dear

So you should start a fresh, 

For there's no gain being curious and jealous of her happiness

For she had faced the darkest phase, the loneliest and scary one filled with sadness, fear, and uncertainty

She has now learned how to put the mask- not the one you put to fool around people

Not the one your parents taught you

But the one which hides her negative emotions

The one that spreads cheerfulness around 

Her gorgeous smile hides the pain and tears endured throughout the darkest phase

For she now knows, every time she travels through the difficult roads it will always lead to beautiful destinations

Which she has arrived far from you, forgetting her memories

And only thriving through the goodness in the world!

Whatever long and however meaningful she wish to tell you now

Her inner self knows you will no longer understand her

But a humane side of her still prays that her wrongdoer be happy- happy wherever he is in his life

For she knows how it feels to be broken 

And never wish anyone to face such a hopeless situation

For she also knows, you don't have the angelic guides around you to help you through the rough course of life

She is happy, yes the happiest person 

She has moved on and hoping you would too!

Author's Note

What do you think about this write-up?
Looking for honest reviews- praises and criticism both welcome!

Reviews

[Hi]

I like what you are doing. You might try to condense it. Don't leave out your main points though, but I see similar messages repeating and I think they would make a stronger impact if stated more succinctly. Some of this may work better as prose instead of poetry or a mix of both. I like the pictures and enjoyed the message of wishing the best for her wrong doer. Thanks.

[Anjali]

I appreciate your time to go through my work. Thank you for your reviews, it means a lot to me. I will consider your suggestions Matt.

[Swetha]

Excellent work, really liked the way you have penned down...

[Anjali]

Thank you for taking your time to go through my work.

[Zephyr]

Another encouraging read Anjali:)
This is a different work on this platform.
Great work!

[Anjali]

Thank you Neetha!

[Zephyr]

My pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the complete poem, words and thoughts. I liked the quotes. I like the journey leading to proper thoughts and ending. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Anjali]

Thank you Coyote for the kind words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[XO Vee]

This was a beautiful piece, and I love the illustrations but I feel like they take away from the content! Good Work !!!

[Anjali]

Thank you for your review... yeah, I understand that the pictures take away the story/content but that's being done keeping in mind even someone as young as a kid can go through my work without getting bored reading them.

[XO Vee]

you know what I love that concept...I never thought of that way. In that case I appreciate the illustrations even more you're channeling everyone and thats beautiful !! keep it up

[Anjali]

Thank you again. :)

[Lord Sarthak]

Really Awesome and heart touching

[Anjali]

Thank you Sarthak for reviewing my story!

[Lord Sarthak]

my pleasure