I'll Be The One To Love You

It's an expression of comforting the person you love to see beyond their pain and expressing your love for them.

I'll Be The One To Love You Darling
I'll be the only one for you
It won't matter what you had in your past
For all that matters to me is your presence
Forget all that brings you down baby
I'll make you the queen of my heart darling
You simply can't put off yourself
Just because someone betrayed you
Coz I'm that person you were looking for completing your soul
God made us the soulmates
And left up to us to complete each other
So here we are but you seem so not altogether
Hence, I'll be the one to love you.

Author's Note

I am looking forward to your reviews.

Reviews

[William Liston]

The tenderness and gentle expression in this piece really made my heart melt, Anjali.
The idea of loving someone despite their pains is one I can relate to, and you've laid that sentiment so realistically and relatably upon the page. Thanks for sharing!

One suggestion: I think you could make this piece a bit more relatable if you took out words like "darling" and "baby." That way, the reader wouldn't have to necessarily interpret this piece as expressing romantic love.

- William Liston

[Anjali]

Thank you William for your review and I'll consider your suggestion :)

[barleygirl]

This is a pretty convincing sell-job, hoping the other person will buy what you're selling. Maybe I'm too jaded in love & life, but I don't believe that another person can convince someone else like this. I would be suspicious of anyone who spoke to me like this. I'll make up my own mind. I don't want anyone telling me how he is going to rule my life. That's what lots of guys do & lots of girls allow it. In my book, this is not the way to go. A woman needs to make up her own mind about love. But your writing is powerful & many will relate to what you are saying becuz that's the way lots of people are (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Really a heart melting poem. The love was very cute and you expression of words are very nice. I like to read more poem like this. Don't stop writing. All the best for your upcoming poetry.

Thanks and Regards

-mohamed rahim Iqbal.

[Anjali]

Thank you Mohamed Rahim Iqbal for your encouraging words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words for love. Gentle, kind and hopeful words shared. Thank you Anjali for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Anjali]

Thank you Coyote for sharing your views on my poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Chase Dylan]

A sweet little piece about breaking down walls... Love is the best...!

[Anjali]

Thank you Silente for reviewing this poem.

[Chase Dylan]

You are most welcome!

[Ashwin Shanker]

heartfelt and passionately written.

[Anjali]

Thank you Ashwin for your valuable review 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

[Einstein Noodle]

touching and romantic .. i like the straight forward language ... reflecting on "life" in general i am not only uplifted by the love you write about but feel the tug of a warning when someone gets emotionally entwined with someone on the mend .. many times does not work out for the one trying "to be there" .. ;)
E.

[Anjali]

Thank you Einstein for those lovely words.

[Zephyr]

True love sees beyond mistakes and enlightens the future.
A strong and touching poem:)

[Anjali]

Thank you Neetha for the encouraging words :)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure