There's only one star in the sky tonight.

There's only one star in the sky tonight.

Purple is the sky,

In which, the star is living.

The light, itself, is dim.

The star is waiting,

For the moon to come up.

But, the moon is well hidden by the trees,

And, it's so far away, this time.

Maybe they are playing hide 'n' seek,

Just like we are.

We're so far away, yet, so close.

I try to get a dream of you,

But, it's hard,

Cuz, I think about you, every night.

There's only one star in the sky, tonight.

And, there's​ only you for me, every night.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Congratulations well done

[Anjali]

Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No worries 😉

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

very romantic love poem whoever wrote this (you!) sounds like you willlove the same woman / girl for the rest of your life, i like that thankyou for entry into my competition, good luck to you

[Anjali]

Thank you...

[Najam Us Saher]

Very nice imagery and you said a lot indirectly.

[Anjali]

Thank you for reading!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're always welcome ☺

[Surya]

Wow I liked the way you ended it, love rite, it's beautiful..I honestly loved it...:)

[Anjali]

I truly appreciate your kind words! Thank you so much.☺

[Mr.Writer]

"There's only one star in the sky, tonight.
And, there's​ only you for me, every night."
Beautiful, heart wrenching verses!
I love this poem a lot overall and think it's engaging, grammar is good as well. It has all the components that're needed :)
Keep it up!

[Anjali]

Thank you for stopping by!😊