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I saw her

I saw her

A Poem by Anjali

I saw her running,
Running away.
I saw her crying,
Crying her tears away.

I saw her coming,
Coming this way.
I saw she was happy,
Happy than ever, yesterday.

I saw her smiling,
And her smiles fade away.
I saw her hope,
As it vanished away.

I saw her looking,
Looking away.
I saw her breathing,
And as it faded away.

I tried to save her,
Putting everything away.
I tried to heal her,
Heal all her scars away.

I needed medicines,
To save her, today.
But, they weren't enough,
Enough to heal her, today.

I saw her walking,
Walking away.
I saw her dying,
Dying away......

© 2017 Anjali



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nice piece of writing. Does the word "her" representing the hope or any female or anything else?

Posted 10 Months Ago


Anjali

10 Months Ago

By 'her', I meant 'myself'. I tried to express the stage where you lose yourself and you can't save .. read more
Arif_Mahmud

10 Months Ago

now i understand the whole idea,welcome
Wow, that's really impactful and bittersweet. I enjoy the play between memory and the present actions. The structure of the stanzas is also really good for what you were trying to do!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Anjali

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much!

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Anjali

Delhi, India



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Hi, I'm anjali, a 16 year old writer, reader and crafter. I'm new at writing poetry and I'm still learning. Hope you like the writings I share.😊 more..

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