far away

far away

A Poem by Anjali

they said the things, they weren't meant to say,
and they made my heart break in every simplest way.

they did the things, they weren't meant to do.
and they abused me and made me doubt myself, too.

they caused the destruction, until the end of the time.
they stopped the devastation, when it was against their own line.

when they couldn't stop their rain, they tried to hide my sunshine,
and started the resistance between me and my own shine.

all they wanted was winning, without even trying,
they dragged me into the deep, and I kept on trying.

they are cruel in every simplest way.
but they can't stop me, as i'm already far far away.

© 2017 Anjali



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

The rhyming is really good!!!!


Posted 2 Months Ago


Anjali

2 Months Ago

Thanks!!😀😀
Amazing, I would suggest you to make necessary changes to create rhyme in 4 and 5 verse.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

2 Months Ago

Thanks and I will make the changes.😊 any suggestions?
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Only that, nothing apart from it, you are most welcome :)
Anjali

2 Months Ago

Ok thanks!😀
Heart-wrenching but truly inspiring Anjali.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

3 Months Ago

Thanks!!!!
Very good work Anjali keep it up..
Very well expressed

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

3 Months Ago

Thank you.
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
SSR
Painful yet beautiful write......
Keep the good work Anjali

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

3 Months Ago

Thanks!!!!

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

97 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on August 24, 2017
Last Updated on August 27, 2017

Author

Anjali
Anjali

Delhi, India



About
Hi, I'm anjali, a 16 year old writer, reader and crafter. I'm new at writing poetry and I'm still learning. Hope you like the writings I share.😊 more..

Writing
Don't pretend Don't pretend

A Poem by Anjali


Old Old

A Poem by Anjali