Sunny Melody

Just happy to be alive

I drink the overflowing cup

Of the citrus sun,

And catch the bursting pulp of rays

Which splash upon my tongue.

Clouds: the icing, Skies: the tart,

Stars: the cream of the crop.

Life's the tastiest of them all:

The glossy cherry on top!

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A great analogy between a drink and the citrus sun. Bravo...................

[Annie]

Thank you :) Sometimes one can just taste a deliciously wonderful day! :D

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome....:)......

[Tim]

I think you did an excellent job here with great metaphors. The positive outlook makes it all the better. :)

[Annie]

Positive outlooks make everything better :) . Thank you for reviewing!