❧SUMMER OF LOVE ❦

❧SUMMER OF LOVE ❦

A Poem by Annie S
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Hope of having a ' summer love' with with the one you know you will never have... not even a second.

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You're the most handsome guy under the sun,
I know a place where we can dance
Swimmingly cool nights and tropical days
Will you come with me if I asked you to?
Tell me do I have a chance?
Campers going down the road, 
little girls in sundresses
And colorful ice-cream cones.

In the sea of love with you i would dive.
I'd jump for joy like a kangaroo
I feel so captivated;
Under your spell- what have you done? 
Tell me quick, Do you love me too?
You hold the fire in the circle of your heart
 like the taste of Sauvignon Blanc wine
I hope to see you again some time
Someday, you will change your mine....


© 2013 Annie S



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Aww! The poem is very sad from my point of view. A girl that hopes a guy will accept to go with her. There is a lot imagery and season-time description to it, which makes it all together a beautiful piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

4 Years Ago

I truly appreciate your comment thank you so much :)
An Interesting plus an awesome write. Keep writing. An excellent job you did. I liked this poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Annie S

4 Years Ago

ahaaaa lol well i know what you meant just making you laugh
just feel that u need it
an.. read more
Inspiring Writer

4 Years Ago

Hahah, me too know, me too meant to make you smiley :)
me too felt you needed that :) lol
read more
Annie S

4 Years Ago

lol wow.. ookay :)
interesting. It sounds very deep and thought out. Nicely done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 9, 2013
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Tags: Summer, Love, Sun, Wine, Fire, heart, tropical, night, Girls, life, fantasy, roses, poetry, romance, silence, hope

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Annie S
Annie S

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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A Poem by Annie S