Chain of Thoughts

Chain of Thoughts

A Poem by Emma Kirchhoff

The mere thought of you
Made it all melt away
Anger
Fear
Sadness
And sent a chill down my spine
But now
The mere thought of you
Brings it all back
Anger
Fear
Sadness
And sends a shock through my heart
I used to think that "me" could be made "we"
But then I realized
There is no "we"
In "lonesome"
There is only "me"

© 2014 Emma Kirchhoff



Author's Note

Emma Kirchhoff
I'm going to try to work on those last two lines, see if I can find a better word to fit in there. If you have any suggestions, feel free to send one my way!

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The piece eloquently expressed your emotion.
I like the piece.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Emma Kirchhoff

3 Years Ago

Thank you kindly!
zainul

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome.:)

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Emma Kirchhoff
Emma Kirchhoff

Sacramento, CA



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I am a budding poet just wanting to share my writing. I appreciate any and all comments. I am going to be a junior next year, and am both a Section and Chapter FFA officer. I enjoy volleyball, Drama C.. more..

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