mmmmm

mmmmm

A Poem by Annie Gryphon

Sitting at the fire tonight

made my heart full of delight


"i will write poems just for you"

that was how we started through


i remember all the insects

you were giving your respects

the clouds and drops of salty sea

the squirrel and the bumblebee


you changed my look

like a good old book

although i am no poet in real

you gave me so much more to feel


kiss you all over tonight

before i turn off the light

mmmmmmmmm.







© 2015 Annie Gryphon



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mmmmmmmmm sounds good! very enticing and inviting :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


kiss you all over tonight
before i turn off the light
mmmmmmmmm.
Hmmmmm ? You reallly are a poet.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 2 Years Ago


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ANM
Caught the mood well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


what a beautiful and simple show of true romance. love it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very peaceful image that into a romantic scene. Evokes some good emotions. Nice poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

thank you, Doug
You give good dream... and leave wishes in your wake.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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what a better way to take all this in, than by a fireplace. mmm mmmm mmmm :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

thank you, moonskittles, for stopping by and reading
I give my respects to all critters includin squirrels. Especially broncos though, they deserve a lot of respect bein they can kick you further than a tin can if they like. mmmmmmmm, nice little poem ya got here deservin of my respect.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

indeed, never forget the broncos :) thanks for your comment!
"GULP!

Oh, m'GOSH, Annie!
Such sensations that just shot all through me from that last verse are sooo sweetly scintillating to the senses.

You should tack-up a "WARNING!" sign before us unsuspecting bards fall into your poetic charms and under your sizzling spell … goodness-ME!

it was those other verses, though, with their lead-ups and spot-on rhymes and a flow like warm honey that teased me into your delicious moment.

I think I should open a window now … LOL!
Seriously excellent sensuality to grip any man … jussst right! I loved it … hugs to you! ~ Richard


Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

oh Richard, where do you find all these sweet words? Do you have a box of them, stored under the ros.. read more
Richard

2 Years Ago

Some poets inspire sweetness from me. ; )
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jb
Sounds romantic, you did a great job :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

thank you, Jessica
jb

2 Years Ago

Your welcome

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Annie Gryphon

Otter River , somewhere in the world



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Annie looks different now. She took away her mask. Writing poetry in English is fun for me, a very special pleasure (my native and daily life language is German). Reviews are welcome in any way.. more..

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