It's you

It's you

A Poem by Annie Gryphon

Once upon a time
I was betting a dime
That my dream came true
That i would find you.

I had a certain image
Of someone to match
Tall and slim
Was his name Jim?

Or maybe John?
No, that's wrong.
Let's call him Jack
Who came from the back
(again, yes again,
that's all i can)

He came out of nowhere 
I really do swear
Like a prince in a fairy tale
Shining bright with no fail

The wild wolf in the forest
who is just the best
My prince, my wolf, my star,
the hottest man in the bar.

He is everything to me
All there ever will be
No one could compete
He makes my life complete.

Oh sweet sexy Jack
Come and touch my back
Kiss me like mad
And never be bad

To your truthful little wife
Who loves you for the rest of her life.



© 2015 Annie Gryphon



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' Oh sweet sexy Jack -- -- Come and touch my back -- -- Kiss me like mad -- -- And never be bad '

There's a real all dancing and singing sensation in this poem.! It's made me smile, left a sweet taste in my mouth. Your happiness doesn't need punctuation, it just flows and flows. Jack and You truly deserve the rest of your life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

that is so sweet, Emmajoy, now you make me smile! Thank you



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Maybe this was humourous but to me it sounded like one speaking of lost love.. I loved the flow and rhyming in your composition☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


Oh sweet sexy Jack
Come and touch my back
Kiss me like mad
And never be bad

So sensual word in your poem raise craze so many times, nice poem dear

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Impressive imagery in a fairy tale wizardry looking beyond certain stages in life to a time of complete fulfilment, this is a wonderful and enlightening thought about life

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

1 Year Ago

thank you, Gerry, it's nice you comment on my poem!
' Oh sweet sexy Jack -- -- Come and touch my back -- -- Kiss me like mad -- -- And never be bad '

There's a real all dancing and singing sensation in this poem.! It's made me smile, left a sweet taste in my mouth. Your happiness doesn't need punctuation, it just flows and flows. Jack and You truly deserve the rest of your life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

that is so sweet, Emmajoy, now you make me smile! Thank you
A lovely write.loved the rhyme too.the intended confusion of names made me smile.well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


I don't know if this was intended to be humorous or not, but it made me smile a great big smile, and gave me a chuckle. Wonderful stuff.
Sometimes I think there's just too much seriousness in this old world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I had fun writing this, too and i'm glad it made you smile.
Spectacular...brilliantly crafted! Well done my friend and consider me in list of your fans!

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's me, i think i know
i must write 25 characters to say so

Posted 2 Years Ago


You are the Queen of Rhyme my sweet

Posted 2 Years Ago


Seems I've "taken" this one a different way than the other commenters... to me this tasted of hurt and shadow...

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Annie Gryphon
Annie Gryphon

Otter River , somewhere in the world



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Annie looks different now. She took away her mask. Writing poetry in English is fun for me, a very special pleasure (my native and daily life language is German). Reviews are welcome in any way.. more..

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