It's you

It's you

A Poem by Annie Gryphon

Once upon a time
I was betting a dime
That my dream came true
That i would find you.

I had a certain image
Of someone to match
Tall and slim
Was his name Jim?

Or maybe John?
No, that's wrong.
Let's call him Jack
Who came from the back
(again, yes again,
that's all i can)

He came out of nowhere 
I really do swear
Like a prince in a fairy tale
Shining bright with no fail

The wild wolf in the forest
who is just the best
My prince, my wolf, my star,
the hottest man in the bar.

He is everything to me
All there ever will be
No one could compete
He makes my life complete.

Oh sweet sexy Jack
Come and touch my back
Kiss me like mad
And never be bad

To your truthful little wife
Who loves you for the rest of her life.



© 2015 Annie Gryphon



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' Oh sweet sexy Jack -- -- Come and touch my back -- -- Kiss me like mad -- -- And never be bad '

There's a real all dancing and singing sensation in this poem.! It's made me smile, left a sweet taste in my mouth. Your happiness doesn't need punctuation, it just flows and flows. Jack and You truly deserve the rest of your life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

that is so sweet, Emmajoy, now you make me smile! Thank you



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Very sweet. I like the rhyming! My favorite part is, Was his name Jim? Or maybe John, no, that's wrong, Lets call him Back." That is great!

Posted 2 Months Ago


I enjoyable ride in the poetry. Your words dance and sang to a proper ending. I did like this poem. Thank you Annie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Coyote, for stopping your horse at my poem and writing these nice words.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Was my pleasure Annie and you are welcome.
it sounded like a song for me, a really nice song though, this is so good. Keep writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

3 Months Ago

thank you for your comment, Rassoul
Rassoul

3 Months Ago

you’re welcome.
Maybe this was humourous but to me it sounded like one speaking of lost love.. I loved the flow and rhyming in your composition☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

3 Months Ago

thank you for your comment, and yes, it might be about lost love, i can see that
Oh sweet sexy Jack
Come and touch my back
Kiss me like mad
And never be bad

So sensual word in your poem raise craze so many times, nice poem dear

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Impressive imagery in a fairy tale wizardry looking beyond certain stages in life to a time of complete fulfilment, this is a wonderful and enlightening thought about life

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

thank you, Gerry, it's nice you comment on my poem!
' Oh sweet sexy Jack -- -- Come and touch my back -- -- Kiss me like mad -- -- And never be bad '

There's a real all dancing and singing sensation in this poem.! It's made me smile, left a sweet taste in my mouth. Your happiness doesn't need punctuation, it just flows and flows. Jack and You truly deserve the rest of your life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

that is so sweet, Emmajoy, now you make me smile! Thank you
A lovely write.loved the rhyme too.the intended confusion of names made me smile.well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


I don't know if this was intended to be humorous or not, but it made me smile a great big smile, and gave me a chuckle. Wonderful stuff.
Sometimes I think there's just too much seriousness in this old world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment. I had fun writing this, too and i'm glad it made you smile.
Spectacular...brilliantly crafted! Well done my friend and consider me in list of your fans!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Annie Gryphon

Otter River , somewhere in the world



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Annie looks different now. She took away her mask. Writing poetry in English is fun for me, a very special pleasure (my native and daily life language is German). Reviews are welcome in any way.. more..

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