You vs. Me

You vs. Me

A Poem by Also known as Clare.
"

"don't fret, i don't hate you... yet."

"

    Close your eyes love

pretend that I love you

when really, I love him...

        still...

 

    Don't fret

I don't hate you...

        yet...

 

Love, the breath of your kiss

still lingers on my lips

     sweet... oh so sweet

I wish he was as sweet as you

 

me? missing you?

not yet...

          ...gimme 5 minutes

 

will i say i'm sorry? maybe...

maybe if you stick around

hunny, don't leave

I don't hate you,

   yet...

     But I want to...

© 2011 Also known as Clare.


Author's Note

Also known as Clare.
This is a... complicated poem, to put it lightly. You really have to tear it apart and try and understand what I'm trying to say. It's very contradicting to itself.

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I really enjoy the contradicting nature of this poem. It shows how people can have conflicting emotions in life. Very good!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Also known as Clare.
Also known as Clare.

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I'll make this short and sweet you dont need to take a seat ~ ~I love the night ~I have strange habits ~Bipolar, OCD, and depressive ~I hate a lot of people, If your one of them, get over it. .. more..

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