Kiss on Thine Lips

A little romance goes a long way. Ye olde English rocks.

a single kiss on thine lips

ne'er again shall we part

hand entwined in thine

thou art mine eternally

 

touch mine heart

with a soul so soft

twas our first kiss

yet twill ne'er be our last

 

mine hand in thine

hearts beating together

our love doth last

Author's Note

I love using old English; I think it adds time and class to poetry. Agreed?

Reviews

[Master Morality]

Most people would probably screw old english style writing up. Glad to see you did it well :D

[Nely Amorim]

It is lovely to use old English when it is well done and yours is well done... lovely and thank you for submitting your writing to my contest. Have a Happy Valentines Day :D

[Lady Of Darkness]

Old English isn't used very often.
loved the imagery in this. well done.

[Secondhand Tink]

Awww I really like this, it's very beautiful Shadow.

Much love. x x x x x x x x x

[Kaden Sylvers]

yeah, i agree
good job on this one (=