Perfectionism???

Perfectionism???

A Poem by N. N. Grainger
"

my very own brand of perfectionism

"

 

Perfectionism?

 

Don’t you see?

I look past your imperfections.

And whatever you hate

In you reflection.

I look for good in doubted places

And find you see,

I quite like your imperfections.

And whatever you hate

in your reflection.

I look for good and I find you

I look for good and see your perfection

It’s so easy to love

your hated reflection.

                        

© 2009 N. N. Grainger


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I can realate to this being a firm believer in embracing one's flaw.
I like your flow.

Posted 14 Years Ago


WOW HOW COOL!!!! I love it! What a great way to look at imperfections! In poetry no less! The one suggestion is that you remove two of the exclamation points in the title. It kind of detracts and it takes away the impression that the narrator is calm. It's always good to have a calm narrator in a poem.
--Andrew

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2009

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N. N. Grainger
N. N. Grainger

Guisborough, Teesside, United Kingdom



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Hello I'm Natalie :) I've been writing on and off now for about four or five years. I am currently studying English at advanced level and am soon to pursue a degree which I hope will involve some for.. more..

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