barriers the poem

boundaries and space between us

Two people standing in front of you
what is their caste, can you tell me?
the creed and race
What they deserve and what they don't

You've to decide how much you want to be unfair with them
how much you want to create mayhem 
You can also decide what should be their roles
your behaviour with them as a whole

Take a decision on their death ceremony
how it;s going to be
What should they eat and should not even touch
You can also give them a hutch
to keep them in their limits

I don't feel any necessity of the GOD
you're there to odd one out
You're the supreme judge
no one can stop you
see there, two people standing in front of you

Author's Note

please tell me your feeling for the same

Reviews

[Tomás Ó C..]

Half of how people react to us is how we approach them. No point in complaining of people trying to jump barriers we put up...

[Happy hours]

thanks a lot for the review, I believe these barriers are in our mind only.We need to change the way we think or make perceptions.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Poet!
My feeling is that to judge another as deserving, etc; by sight alone is unjustly egotistical, condescending, and arrogant, but who am I to judge … LOL!
As one who believes we each have within us the same spark of life that gifted us breath and a heartbeat, I know, too, we are all born equal … sadly, some more "equal" than others, and your words of the real world touched me deeply, for I am, also, one who would wish (if it were possible) for all mankind and womankind to stand together on the same level of acceptance, intelligence, talent, understanding, compassion, empathy, etc; etc; etc; but, i know it is an impossibility, as we are each individually different in too many ways from each other, and "alike kinds" tend to migrate into "alike groups", but we can learn to respect and regard, even to love, our unique differences.
In most all cultures caste is an issue, one I feel can never be erased, because it will always be obvious we are so very different in so many ways … often, too many ways to live as one.
Sad, but true, and these are my feelings.
One thing to consider: When two people are standing in from of you to judge, you are, also, standing in front of them, and that it is these very differences that make the world such a lovely, varied, creative, and controversial place to dwell … it is how we handle our differences that can make the greatest difference of all.

Thank you, My Dear Poet Friend, for sharing your fine skills and this thought-provoking piece from the depths of your mind, heart, and soul! ⁓ Richard

[Happy hours]

Thank you for the valuable review... :)

[Richard🖌]

Oh, sure thing!