Complications

Complications

A Poem by Anthony
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Crappy poem i just came up with. 31Aug09

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The Love of many,

Conceals the love of one

I watch from the shadows

They watch the darkness

I look for the one

They look for the fun

I am alone

For they cannot bear

The love I wish to give in care

So now I lay all alone

While they condone

The pressure of society...

© 2010 Anthony


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Ahhh,the joys and pains of the love of many and the love of 'the one'.
Another fantastic piece. Going in my library.

Posted 14 Years Ago


alone such a harsh word yet it describes so many so many that have surrounded them selvs in a desprit attempt to blind in but being alone despite what people say is not caused by a lack of socialization but true anger true hate that none can understand an ethenal darkness cloaked with a mask of happiness secreats covered by lies this my friend is truly being alone but alas I am a boy of only 13 years of age and my opinion counts for very little

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think i get what your saying that a single love is hidden by the worldly love and unstable love of others. Though sometimes that unstable love of the world is what truly sets you free. This is a nice piece and i love the beginning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nope. it's not bad. =] maybe break the first line into two. =]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Anthony
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Council Bluffs, IA



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