Confused Love©

love, confused

Someone told me you weren't the man for me,
It was just false words cause I couldn't see.
All that was in my face shining through to others,
I never felt unloved, betrayed or smothered.
Yet who was I truly living for?
Will there ever be something more?
Sometimes I feel like I'm going to lose,
What’s the right thing to do, what will I choose?
I think about all the wonderful times,
So happy I felt, it should be a crime.
But the truth is who am I living for?
Is it you, or is there someone else in store.
I tried so many times to forget the words and just be,
But the question of who you are they never leave.
Some say I can do better then you,
Others say hold on and stay true.
But in the end, what will I do?

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Great writing skills. The confused lover-no matter what we all drink from the same cup.
A puzzled heart is never good.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Only you have the answers to tell you what to do.

I never felt unloved, betrayed or smothered.
Yet who was I truly living for?
Will there ever be something more?

to be lost and confuse and searching for answers, is our quest through life.

Nice work, I enjoyed reading.