Unattainable Love �

love, muse, feeling

Your happiness means more to me than what I want for myself,
More than the passion of having fine wealth.
Although the thought of your hands on me makes my body pulse in a way that’s unreal,
To kiss your lips while your holding me will give me a sense of completion I could never feel.
When our eyes met you brought a sense of comfort to me,
A relaxing feeling I thought would never be.
Your smile lightens up a darkened room.
You are the silver fork to my silver spoon.
To make you happy is my only goal,
You are the spirit to my lonely soul.
Just have me for one night,
Take my hand and show me what's right.
Show me a better place for my heart to lay,
Give me a place for my love to stay.
Knowing what we were and could have been,
This feeling I have, I could only win.
So say you'll never change and be my beautiful muse,
Cause in the end your the only one I'll choose.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning poem!

[Jimmy Greenie]

Very nice. I love love. This is really good and really shows the love the person feels.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I enjoyed the reflection of a love. great write. I am always glad to ready your work. I look forward to reading more of your material.