Winds of Change

 

 

I trace the  memory of your lips as they softly kiss my tummy,

while days of wine and roses are buried beneath cobblestone

roads...

 

Hard and impenetrable...

 

Can you still feel my presence awaken you deep in the night

as your sleepy eyelashes brush my cheek?

 

We change and renew, but does love, in its purest form, alter

perception?

 

Destiny becomes impatient when we trip and fall...

 

too many times.

 

See into my soul, for I am now a traveler in the Dark Terrain
of my subconscious...

 

seeking enlightenment unparalleled...

 

stirring as I release...

 

Feeling my spine as it takes root in the Earth in attempt to
absorb positive energies...

 

While fierce winds sweep away a past that once dwelled in a
Season of Fire...

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANNA]

I just have to say that I have been reading your work since I've been on here but never gave my review too you! I just think you take it above n beyond. Your words your magic with such seduction. It blows my mind. I love you poetry! I try to write like you but I can't or it not the write time! Your very gifted and thank you for letting be a friend of yours
Amazing, Brilliant poem!!

Much love n respect,
Anna
Huggsss

[These Haunted Hallways]

WoW! Beautiful and very haunting, hun. I agree with everything u've said here, cause the paths we take in life, are adventurous. We learn from things as we go. Yes, it might take some time in trying to get to our destinations in life, but i guess we should always remember that we are loved in some way, and that love will guide us to wherever we want to go. Beautifully-romantic poem :)

B.A.

[darkgurl]

Wow! This is ever so lovely and a wonderful inspirational piece, enjoyed this....Kim

[An Open Venue]

A poem of recollection yet at the same time hope and perseverance. I have enjoyed this visit to your page.

Ven

[Reeses]

You cease to amaze me. This was deep and strong. And your art is alwayz lovely. Great write my friend!

[Antony]

I don't know that it alters our perception, I think it takes a greater love than the one we had in order to alter our perception, we may seek wisdom and knowledge and challenge ourselves, or force ourselves to find that one person, who is able to change our perception, but it doesn't necessarily mean we will find it, even though we attempt to forget the old........ even though we continue to trip and fall.

Feeling my spine as it takes root in the Earth in attempt to
absorb positive energies...

While fierce winds sweep away a past that once dwelled in a
Season of Fire...

Tony

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Wow! This is so thoughtful and deep, but you know this is what life is all about, to change yourself with time and with experiences of life.
I agree with Amanda that "Life is a journey, not a destination"...It keeps on unfolding itself with time and it's up to us to keep our pace with the change or not. It is certainly not very often that everyone changes themselves with time but sooner or later life changes for itself and we don't have any control over it.

"We change and renew, but does love, in its purest form, alter
perception?" - I simply loved this part, Love is among few things in this world which never change, the feel and passion of love always remains constant, it is just like our outlook towards love changes with time...

Great work like always, so so so thoughtful and deep!

[Periac]

such a beautifuly well imagined piece ...one that rolls off imagination and brings me a steady warmth

I trace the memory of your lips as they softly kiss my tummy,
while days of wine and roses are buried beneath cobblestone
roads...
Hard and impenetrable...
Can you still feel my presence awaken you deep in the night
as your sleepy eyelashes brush my cheek?


so lovely

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This poem is ethereal, dreamy with tastefully selected words saturated in delicate and flowing intonation. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing with me.

[He@ther!]

This is gorgeous!!! I really love your use of imagery and detail. The atmosphere of the piece is surreal and beautiful. Very, very inspiring!! Thank you so much for posting this, I needed this kind of inspiration!!:)

-Heather