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A Poem by TamiViolet
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adaptation of a poem by William Blake called 'Love's Secret'

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Always keep your cloak of mystery,

        Spread across the violet sky,

            Or he might miss your beauty,

                   Seeking softer, silent eyes.

 

                        She unveiled her secrets;

                         She unclothed her heart,

                         For she loved him...too soon,

                      She unclothed her heart.

 

                  Dreadfully, he did depart;

             A puzzling stranger came by,

         Whispering in the quiet darkness,

Whisking him away with a sigh.

 

© 2009 TamiViolet


Author's Note

TamiViolet
This is wriiten just as his was...three quatrains with rhyme occurring in lines two and four...one and three... There is such truth in Blake's verse, yet it is but 12 lines.

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Im not familiar with this writer, but i think you've done a very beautiful job. Very calm and peaceful write that explains, i believe, that love should last forever instead of being short. Great work! :)

B.A.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I am a fan on William's work. Wonderful job with your version. Thanks for creating and sharing a romantic piece of poetry. The visual works well with your powerful words.

She unveiled her secrets;

She unclothed her heart,

For she loved him...too soon,

She unclothed her heart.

Those words are art!


Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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quite an interesting and truthful write...the way you positioned the lines really set off the content of the piece.

nicely done, my dear.

A

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A most beautiful piece of poetic expression

wonderfully penned in both form and content!

WeLL DonE!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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