Rhapsodized

Rhapsodized

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

Spring has just about sprung, yes? Along with so much more...

"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The silvery rain stings our faces,

   And the assault of April's discontent

     Awakens dreams pressed into

 

Empty

Wine cellars...

 

Purple crocuses bloom wild in woods

   Preparing for summer fantasy as

     Nature's rhythm,

 

Graceful like raving lovers reunited,

 

          Unveils dormant spirits waiting...

 

                To be reborn...

 


© 2010 TamiViolet



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I ADORE the alliteration in the first three lines... Simply beautiful... This poem was amazingly stunning. It's going to be added to my library. Simple fantastic. The feeling is so... "classic"... I don't know any other way to describe it. Fascinating and great picture too. 100/100 across the board!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

I love spring. I also love good writing! Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Stark, and wild raving nut about this !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it, passionate and alive. Especially love "Graceful like raving lovers reunited"

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this poem! Very nice!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nice...and with Spring just around the corner...yes a very nice view of how it compares to so much...of life...

nice...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
OT
ahh another great poem - your descriptions are inspired - love the purple crocuses - you pick perfect words to craft your pictures!! nice!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

once again..a simple and very meaningful...the imagery has been used so gracefully that it blends easily with other lines....i loved the way you have narrated the seasonal change...one's end smoothly leading to another's start...felt as if m watching them merge into each other without any fear..an embodiment of seasons...
beautiful...beautiful...beautiful!!!!!!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have not read you before, I'm ashamed to admit.
This is a beautiful piece in many ways.

Posted 6 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
KL
You've captured something here. The hyperbole of the seasons is remarkable: 'Graceful like raving lovers reunited,' I think this is my favourite line as I could easily visualize an embodiment of spring and summer seeing each other for the first time since winter, during that transitional stage of seasonal change. I believe the last two lines are the definition of summer itself... dormant spirits signifying nature or human beings themselves. Overall this poem flows really nicely and says everything it needs to say, big fan.

PS. 1170 views...?! Seriously?!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you write, simple and meanuingful, I will have to read this again (and maybe again and again) to fully appreciate all the thoughts in it. Excellent writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2687 Views
39 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on March 9, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010

Author

TamiViolet
TamiViolet

Somewhere behind the evening sky..., PA



About
more..

Writing
rhythms rhythms

A Poem by TamiViolet



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


hush-hush hush-hush

A Poem by TamiViolet