Rhapsodized

Rhapsodized

A Poem by TamiViolet
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Spring has just about sprung, yes? Along with so much more...

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The silvery rain stings our faces,

   And the assault of April's discontent

     Awakens dreams pressed into

 

Empty

Wine cellars...

 

Purple crocuses bloom wild in woods

   Preparing for summer fantasy as

     Nature's rhythm,

 

Graceful like raving lovers reunited,

 

          Unveils dormant spirits waiting...

 

                To be reborn...

 

© 2010 TamiViolet


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I ADORE the alliteration in the first three lines... Simply beautiful... This poem was amazingly stunning. It's going to be added to my library. Simple fantastic. The feeling is so... "classic"... I don't know any other way to describe it. Fascinating and great picture too. 100/100 across the board!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Beautifully written friend xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful. Picture was very beautiful also. I like the feel of possibility and new hope in the poem. I wish I could write and say so much in so few words. I enjoy your poetry.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intriguing, the sparks from such words as "sting," "assault," "discontent" in the midst of otherwise graceful lyric flow.

Much like the friction inherent in the erotic vis-a-vis the romantic, I suppose.

I find this rite of spring's awakening of "dreams pressed into/Empty/Wine cellars" particularly striking.

Your touch is nimble, nuanced, sublime.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is why I love reading your poetry! IT IS GOOD!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, it is not beautiful ! It is fresh and green
and frothy like the spring. It is poetry.
You have captured the essence of mercurial
fluctuation in the weather and in the human
that suffers such nuances.

I look forward to reading more of this fresh,
vigorous, stimulating passion from a gifted
artist.

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a profoundly beautiful write, moving us into the newness of life in the spring.. of the world.. of hearts.. It's like a dream that awakens... Wonderful, enchanted form and flow...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

beautiful in purple (my favorite color of spring) and romantic :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

How wonderful of this poem is. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a friend at work forced some purple crocuses and brought them to work, they bloomed in January . . . your words made me smile

such a graceful, elegant spring song you've painted here

thank you for making me smile

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I ADORE the alliteration in the first three lines... Simply beautiful... This poem was amazingly stunning. It's going to be added to my library. Simple fantastic. The feeling is so... "classic"... I don't know any other way to describe it. Fascinating and great picture too. 100/100 across the board!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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