rhythms

rhythms

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

Tis what Tis, folks...

"


Life continues to unfold as she discovers herself with each alluring indigo sunset and seductive dawn, blushing sometimes...


In modesty she unravels kindness and gentility that chaos dare not destroy...


For her strength reigns...


'If I were another persona, who would become me?'  --a passionate red rose coveted with prickly thorns of yesterday...  She welcomes them...


Unafraid...


She is violet...blue...pink...aquamarine...peridot...


Iridescent,


especially on Sunday...



She
is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some walk away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions...

Now, she sighs a happy sigh, bidding auf wiedersehen as the Heavens reach down and kiss her subtle pink lips with gratitude...making their offer...

She sips java in a room adorned with heroic crystal chandeliers and silken white drapes and linens where she and her new lover share chocolate truffles and plump strawberries with cream, yet she knows if he should banish into the foggy London night during midsummer...

she
will
ascend...

even after Death...





© 2012 TamiViolet



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"She is Venus and Aphrodite, the epitome of love and beauty although some have walked away from her depth and light with distorted wire rim glasses and ill-fated perceptions..."
My favorite bit :)
You've really succeeded in creating a character here, a mystical and romantic character that plays with the reader senses.
Well done :)
x

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These words are magic. Truly a spectacular write, friend. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i never get tired of words like these

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Wow, love the image you paint of this soul, intriguing. Love the photograph, beautiful. Excellent and captivating.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a touching and powerful piece that lends to the strenght of the female form, well done, good read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incredibly tender....Thank you

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, wonderful and lots of other nice words ending in ful :-)
Stunning journey your tale takes us on.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful indeed :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, so captivating.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

these are wonderful words to come back to

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poetry...I am just in awe of this delicious verse.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Somewhere behind the evening sky..., PA



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