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i love everything about this piece. the subtlety, the underlying yearnings, the word choice -everything.
it's simply astounding how our routines bring back memories of the beloved people in our lives and this poem just perfectly captures that mystical feeling of recollection.
the words hold the attention of the reader so firmly that it warps them into your own universe.
i loved how you give a progression of emotions by presenting a step-by-step procedure of making tea. very novel indeed.
simple as it is marvelous! great job!
Posted 9 Months Ago
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