If......

If......

A Poem by AprilRN1210
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just thinking out loud

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If I were a Star


glittering, animated fun


incandescent illumination


second only to the sun.


 


If I were a  Flower


fleshy petals dripping confection


infatuation’s aphrodisiac


dulcet, aromatic affection.


 


If I were an  Angel


alluring mankind


bewitching enticement


both sinful and divine.


 


If I were a Dream


tantalizing, magnetic illusion


provocative stimulation


delicious diverting delusion.


 


 


If I were a Thought


refreshing delight


entertain, captivate


stimulate and excite.




© 2015 AprilRN1210



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Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.


Diego

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

3 Years Ago

thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wr.. read more



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Dear poet, how you awaken glimpses of yourself in every line, these sweet, sacred sights that fill the soul with joy, with bliss, with dreamish delight. In some way we become such wondrous illuminations, aphrodisiacs, enticements, and more, and through your poetic music you speak it into the world. Play on, always.

Posted 5 Months Ago


AprilRN1210

5 Months Ago

you're always so sweet, thank you, Craig. I do hope to awaken in others and stir in me what needs t.. read more
Great imagery. Beautiful telling words. Sometimes a single word or thought can capture so much. Enjoyed this very much. Nice thoughts. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


The If's and But's of life... Thankfully we can transform our if's as we choose.
Looks like great intentions are in place already.

Posted 1 Year Ago


What a concoction you've mixed here...tis fun and sexy, alluring and wanton... quite naughty in fact! Whatever you write: naughty, nice, long or short has style and wit. Good for you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo inspirational!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


if i was a garden i would like to cherish such a flower
nice i love it nice graphic to

Posted 2 Years Ago


I adore this piece, the words seem edible! This poem seems to shimmers light and joy. I particularly enjoyed the words you chose to describe the flower "fleshy petals".

Posted 2 Years Ago


This piece is really cool as well, fun free thinking and full of imagination.
Good vibe! PTL!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

I apologize for the delayed response, live has been a little chaotic lately.. Thank you for this lov.. read more
AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

*life* not live.. grrrr gotta love autocorrect..
Wow! this piece radiates joy and positive energy .
Wonderfully penned .
Very well done.

Thank you.
Angad

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed:)
April, I love this beautiful piece. It is captivating, enchanting, and joyful. Great writing, again and again. I love to read what floats through that talented brain of yours. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

3 Years Ago

Hey girl!.. Thank you.. lots of random, silly things float through this quirky brain of mine, I am t.. read more
Bright Ocean Star

3 Years Ago

hugs to you, too! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving! :)

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